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Lonely Girl
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
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Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 04:29:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I cry as I write
This cold and and lonely night
You know I'd stay a while
But I must cut away my smile
Some say I fear
To others I'm 'not all here'
But to me I'm as close
As the shadow of your ghost
Some say I ought to be in the looney bin
Riddled with guilt and sin
But really I'm just the lonely girl
Wandering this lonely world...
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2005-04-13 16:29:59]
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Re: Lonely Girl
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 02:04:24 PM AEST
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Great write. SOme of the lines were really beautiful. I hate how people are so horrible. People still torment me sometimes and call me "goth freak" sometimes. Just show them your stuff and let them be intimidated. I'm sure they're only scared at your wisdom. Well, i hope things improve! Keep writing.
~*Naomi of Night*~ |
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Re: Lonely Girl
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by Maruna on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 05:21:07 PM AEST
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| You really conveyed the feelings of being picked on well, and I hope those immature people leave you alone. I would like to help you with the rhythm of your lines a little though, so comment me back if that sounds good! :) |
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