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Down To The Blackest Core
Contributed by
jackman
on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 04:25:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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down to the blackest core
we know there must be no remorse
there can be no repentance
for the villiany of our kin
for the infernal violent din
must kill the holy man within
take your loaded pistol
shoot your brother in the head
watch the bullet enter swiftly
watch him become dead
and fear not for where he's going
for we all know where he's been
even if in life
he himself refused to come clean
rape the father, rape the mother
rape the child of yourself
and i shall toast with the blood of the virgin
to your dangerous mental health
the innocent shall perish
as the violent grow strong
and destroy all loving men
who deem them to be wrong
if the ignorant can thrive
then the strong ones will survive
and dominate this orb
down to the blackest core
Copyright ©
jackman
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2005-04-13 16:25:54]
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Re: Down To The Blackest Core
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 03:13:32 PM AEST
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| oooh, this ones rough. really dark, nasty i should say. but hey. its something like the real life is. so therefore the naked truth! |
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Re: Down To The Blackest Core
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 05:32:04 PM AEST
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| The well written word pictures and personal voice of this piece made for a very interesting (and good) read. |
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Re: Down To The Blackest Core
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by justme03 on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 08:10:22 PM AEST
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| so descriptive and true. great voice and love the choice of words and love the title. awesome! |
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