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Alone
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 04:23:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Alone, though I fear
You are far from my 'here'
A fear that courses through
A fear of you
Alone, though I stand
I don't need your hand
Alone I stood
As though bleeding your blood
Alone, though I bleed
Your love I don't need
Alone I cry
As I finally die...
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2005-04-13 16:23:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Onslaught on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 06:03:05 PM AEST (User
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Yeah, I liked this one. Good flow. It had a very good feel to it. Hard for me to explain but it definately is a good one. Could work well to some industrial electronic song.
And some advice about that gang of people that were chasing you, I would recommend just don't move at all, stand your ground, ignore them, close your eyes, forget them, sit down on the ground and just rest. if they push too far and touch you in any way, then they have crossed the line and anything after that you can do to them in self defense. Even if you fight back and they win and you get a little hurt, beat up, I't won't compare to the emotional pain you might feel now, and they will respect you and they will leave you alone. You're just gonna have to step in to it and take the punches. As long as you fight back if they press too far. |
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