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Change of Air
Contributed by
dragonluvsong
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Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 08:52:07 AM in AEST
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When I used to be at home,
I thought the place a sweet honeycomb;
But as I go back today
I cannot describe it in quite the same way.
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2005-04-13 08:52:07]
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Re: Change of Air
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by BraveSaint on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 03:02:10 PM AEST
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| short but sweet |
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Re: Change of Air
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by Mikayla on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 04:32:28 PM AEST
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I used to think that it only took a few words to express your feelings. Now I'm thinking that you need a few more than what you wrote.
Way to short. It there was no effort into this poem,
you just put any old thing down just to do it.
i gave it a 3 cause I'm not mean |
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