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Cracked
Contributed by
ForeverAndADay
on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 06:20:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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His eyes shine emerald white...
Emitting coals from deep inside...
A chunk of life cut,
As the blade runs it's course
Tear away the evening...
In it's ruthless skive.
Thorny brambles rise like rusted
nail from dusty earth.
Thorns so sharp, they
would pierce the soul they
For now only scorn.
Smoke arises along his cheeks like
dirt...
As he take a breath...
He whispers in toneless words.
Their hands bend and twist...
Like lovers, exotic dance...
Giant blades run through them...
Rusted steel...
As the flames bounce off...
White fire...
They place him in a trance.
Here he lies, child awakened.
He hides under waves.
This sea of demented life forms...
Stretch of transparency...
And stoneless graves.
He knows no summoned gaurdian...
He hides behind no wall...
As tall as blistered sky.
Those black doors he was
warned of...
Shadow from far away...
He has arrived.
He curses...
He's alive...
He curses...
He's alive.
DNB
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ForeverAndADay
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2005-04-13 06:20:48]
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Re: Cracked
(User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 04:01:27 PM AEST
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| Sounds scarrying... Still I didn't get the message except feeling despair, struggle and some anger hope. |
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Re: Cracked
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by chazthepoet on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:02:49 PM AEST
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very good
interesting |
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