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Your Favorite Lake
Contributed by
xsitm
on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 02:20:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Think of this as a sunset on your favorite lake
With an orange sun sparkling off the clearest water
All the while shining through
Reflecting a sky as brilliant as you
And there are birds flying overhead and through the clouds
As a breeze comes to carry them off
I think of you
And the angelic wings of glory that swept you away
But I know your still here, as ever present as the stars
And although the sun has gone away your light keeps me warm
Like millions of candles that forever will burn
And all of those flames I hold close to my heart
They symbolize your memory as the most beautiful art
Of the trees and the sky on warm summer days
And beautiful sunsets on your favorite lake
And when I see these paintings I realize
Every single line you drew,
Is what paints me my favorite picture of you
Copyright ©
xsitm
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2005-04-13 02:20:03]
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Re: Your Favorite Lake
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by imaginestars on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 02:27:40 AM AEST
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| I just have to say, this is beautiful. Could you possibly give some inight into what your inspiration is? It really touched me, and naturally I can relate it to a part of my life. But please do tell where you're coming from if you don't mind. |
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Re: Your Favorite Lake
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 03:55:06 AM AEST
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Wow, doesn't really matter what inspired it to me it's just heavenly beautifull.
Awesome masterpeice to all that read it.
I think it's the type of right that each-n-everyone that reads it it feels like it was written for them.
Great job, great writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Your Favorite Lake
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 07:17:25 AM AEST
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| Excellent description of nature..very beautiful and very sweet. Venkat |
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