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With You
Contributed by
tin
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Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 12:55:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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For eons i could gaze,
Into your eye's so vivid and deep,
Such beauty in your eyes,
I hope to never see them weep.
For centuries i could stay here,
Resting in your arms,
Even with a will of iron,
I can't resist your charm.
For miles i could drive,
With you sitting by my side,
As long as your with me,
Even the biggest rush will be a joy ride.
For years i could stay with only you,
On my faith in you, you can rely,
I wish only to be with you,
Until the moment i die.
With you i am happy,
Without you i feel so low,
You're the world's greastest seamstress,
But it's happiness that you sew.
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tin
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2005-04-13 00:55:43]
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Re: With You
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 01:26:35 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write. You need to reach up and grab more of these when they float by u.
good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: With You
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 09:27:15 AM AEST
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| I just want to say this poem is really good....I just started writing and I wish I could just think about stuff like this out of no were. I enjoy reading a lot and hope to see more like this posted by you.....thank you |
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