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Reflection in the mirror...
Contributed by
mina-1
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Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:54:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Standing in front of the mirror
A blackened reflection stares back
One that carries burdens
Producing palpitations of panic attacks
The face in the mirror used to be elegant
Like a princess with a crown
Until you entered her life
From then she suffered and went down
She endured excruciating pain
To every part of her body
She's far too long sustained
No longer a thing of prodigy
Where is the princess
That once wore a noble crown
Now she lays battered and abused
Humiliated, laughed at like a clown
Beauty once adorned from this fragile heart
Sadly that is all lost
Broken deeply and shattered apart
Tears sear this blackened face
They do their dance everyday
As the reflection in the mirror
Chokes on the lump in her airway
She always turns to the mirror
In hope the reflected face is unmasked
Searching for the true hidden image
Waiting to emerge and once again bask
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Re: Reflection in the mirror...
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by allymp on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:10:48 PM AEST
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Re: Reflection in the mirror...
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by breny on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:30:32 PM AEST
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oh very emotional Sue! And also very well written.
Great work and keep it up! :-D
~Brenna~ |
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Re: Reflection in the mirror...
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by Tru2Myself on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:51:10 PM AEST
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I love this! Its so wonderfully written. Love your choice of words.
Lauren |
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Re: Reflection in the mirror...
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:06:10 PM AEST
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IF REFLECTIONS COULD READ EVERYTHING WOULD BE ALRIGHT! AND ALL THE WRECKING SHOULD HEAL BY THE NIGHT!! YOU'RE NOT FAR FROM BEING SAVED!!! SIMPLY BECAUSE OF THAT PRECIOUS HEART GOD MUST'VE GAVE!!!!
LOOK UP MY FRIEND & YOU TO WILL SEE!!!!! THAT REAL LOVE HAS NO END FOR THOSE WHO TRUELY BELIEVE!!!!!! IF I CAN BELIEVE THAT THE POEMS YOU WRITE BRING FEELINGS OF WONDER,THEN YOUR LIFE IS MUCH TOO FAR TO EVER GO UNDER!!!!!!! A BEAUTIFUL PIECE WITH SO MUCH INSPIRATION!!!!!!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Reflection in the mirror...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 12:19:12 AM AEST
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Sue
Very emotional and well written poem, I can relate
Hugs
Leia |
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