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Fading Away
Contributed by
Eclipse
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Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:39:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Seems to me that you're fading away,
Please don't go, please just stay,
You're leaving me now, I can just see,
Fate led us somewhere we weren't meant to be
My eyes fill with tears, my heart just won't start,
For days turn to nights when we are apart,
But I'm losing you now, and I know that it's true,
My first real love will no longer be you
I pray each night that you may turn back,
Lift me up now and off this lone track,
But however much I cry, and wish with pain,
You won't ever reach out and love me again
Don't you remember that day in the sun,
Laughter hiding something deeper we'd won,
Could have stayed in that moment forever,
Thought our lives were destined together
Breaks my heart to know I'm only a friend,
Breaks my heart to know we've reached the end,
But can't let it show that I'm broken inside,
So behind this strained smile my feelings shall hide.
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Eclipse
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2005-04-12 19:39:52]
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Re: Fading Away
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by Vermillion on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:42:16 PM AEST
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what a true emotional write, very gripping and raw. keep up the good work.
sorry you're upset tho
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Re: Fading Away
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by breny on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:20:02 PM AEST
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Breaks my heart to know I'm only a friend,
Breaks my heart to know we've reached the end,
But can't let it show that I'm broken inside,
So behind this strained smile my feelings shall hide.
I'm in your place here. I would rather show my true feelings, but i know if i do it will just create more unhappiness. this is heartfelt and very emotional. I like it a lot and I will be watching for more of your work. :-D
Great Write
~Brenna~ |
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Re: Fading Away
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by Tru2Myself on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:56:41 PM AEST
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I really really like this. I know what its like to hide your feelings behind a smile. It really sucks. Don't let it get to you... it caused me to do some pretty stupid things...
Lauren |
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