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I'M SORRY
Contributed by
mexarican1526
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Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 05:51:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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As i lay here,
I can feel the blood dripping from my head,
thinking about if i wil live or endup dead,
asking my self why,
why did i go wit my drunk friend,
thinking about all the other things i coulda said,
instead of getting in the car knowing he was drunk,
maybe we woulda never ended up in this accident,
in the middle of no where,
no one around to help us i sware,
my hearts beating so fast,
yet i feel my legs getting numb,
gosh how could i be so dumb,
so dumb that i risked my life with out thinking,
so dumb that i knew he was drunk,
but i still went for that ride,
then i guess this is what i get for that,
its getting hard for me to breath now,
i think im dieing now,
my heart is slowly stopping,
my last words " I'm sorry"
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Re: I'M SORRY
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 08:30:21 PM AEST
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Touching write.....with a great message..Thanks for sharing this.
Welcome to YPDC... Hope to see more from you soon..
Jenni |
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Re: I'M SORRY
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by Crookedpoet09 on
Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 05:10:47 PM AEST
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| Good one, maybe you could have wrote in a more mature manner like "could of" instead of "coulda" but that is my opinion. Keep up the nice writes. |
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