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Going to hell
Contributed by
SelfDistruction
on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 04:55:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I feel like i could die right now
Just take a gun and shoot myself
I doubt anyone would miss me
or even notice i was gone
People call me a freak
they say I'm a waste of space
That i should kill myself
and get it over with
Maybe they're right
I'm useless in this world
I'd probably fit in better in hell
with the devil and demons
and all the other bad people like me
So here i am with a gun
Ready to end my ***** life
I'm going to a better place now
well better for me anyways
I'm going to hell
where everybody is treated just the same
Copyright ©
SelfDistruction
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2005-04-12 16:55:34]
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Re: Going to hell
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 05:24:59 PM AEST
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| good poem .. hopefully you dont actually feel like this because then i would jump into my screen and go into yours and straggle you .. lol j/k .. but overall it was good .. nice write ! |
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Re: Going to hell
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by Vermillion on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:50:07 PM AEST
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wow....that was an outstanding write. you sure did capture my emotions pretty well and i LOVE the ending. keep it up!
~vermillion~ |
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Re: Going to hell
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by blue_angel on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 08:17:40 PM AEST
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amazing.... just amazing. i hope that your not actually considering this. i know how u feel, all the pain and no one missing you... i feel exactly the same. but sometimes you just have to put up with it...
neways great write..... luv n hugs
jennie* |
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