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As the Sun Goes Down
Contributed by
GurlyTye
on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 04:53:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As the sun goes down
a new world awakens
As we lie down to sleep
others arise from thier beds
Roaming the dark streets
They watch,
they look ,
they hunt.
The living hurry,
to the safety of thier homes
the world of the night
is a world
where only the strong survive
The stragglers will die
then arise as something new
they will join the others
they will prowl the night
With fear of the sun
and love for the moon
they feed on that
which is thicker then water
If you are smart
You'll be safe in your bed
For as the sun goes down
a new world awakens
Copyright ©
GurlyTye
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2005-04-12 16:53:52]
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Re: As the Sun Goes Down
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by sride686 on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 03:43:18 AM AEST
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| Vampires are dark so this would be a dark poem alright. If I may ask what makes you write about something like this? Its so much different from the rest of your work. But its always nice to read something new…..Steve |
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Re: As the Sun Goes Down
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 04:59:40 PM AEST
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This is one of those that ought to be gettin a few more reads. Many here like such writes as this, heh, me included. It works well not overly dark or morbid. A pleasure to read.
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