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I am this Tear
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 04:18:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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i am this tear
the color of your skin
hold me near
let loose within
if you wonder
where i might be
i might be under
where light can see
i will dry
if you let me stay
keep your sigh
wipe, not away
i am this tear
streaming down
i feel the fear
of dreaming now
calm and calm again...my tired friend
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2005-04-12 16:18:48]
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Re: I am this Tear
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 08:13:47 PM AEST
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An outstanding piece of poetry so very well expressed. I can relate to ur poem so much as I've always wanted to let go. A deep and very well conveyed write. Well done.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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Re: I am this Tear
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by allymp on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:16:39 PM AEST
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| wow this is wonderful...shows a lot of talent...i would appriciate you comments on some of my poems as well |
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