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I Almost Wish It Was Rape
Contributed by
Dri
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Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:55:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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watching the water froth over the rocks
of a river in Obermorh
(Germany will forever be
the idealized version of itself
nostalgia turns childhood into
a landscape of innocent recklessness)
I did not know, then,
what I wish I did not know now
that I can dive into the
darkest of overindulgence
and learn to drink from your intensity
and I almost wish it was rape
I almost wish I did not have to accept
that I can enjoy
something so sick
that humanity can crave this
that your mind can jump
from blood to lust,
and worse, I can follow you there
to that place
where pain and fear are all mixed up
with sex and pleasure
I almost wish…
and the wish makes me less of myself
because to me
rape will always be far better
than consensual pain
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Dri
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2005-04-12 13:55:04]
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Re: I Almost Wish It Was Rape
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by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 02:01:53 PM AEST
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| This is one of those that is really difficult to comment on.. without knowing the author in a personal way... but when is comes to the written word. it was put together well. |
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Re: I Almost Wish It Was Rape
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by Shishke_Bob on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 03:29:08 PM AEST
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I agree, this is one of those poems that you dont comment on because you dont know the individual who wrote it, but all knowing aside this was well done, and I do hope that this is just you writing words and not something that happend to you. God bless
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Re: I Almost Wish It Was Rape
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by Kyarn on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 01:37:37 PM AEST
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| I can comment on this...because i do know the author *smile* Your poetry's getting dark lately m'love...but it's good. Twisted, a bit, but honest of things that humans can feel. I like the last lines, 'rape will always be far better than consensual pain'. True. Powerful. |
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