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We'll Get There Someday
Contributed by
GurlyTye
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Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:40:53 PM in AEST
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FamilyPoems
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18 hours of hard labor
and you brought me into this world
with your bright blue eyes
and your shiny red hair
I knew you were my mother.
even though we fought
every step of the way,
I just knew
we'll get there someday
Through all the struggles,
Durg abuse,
Alcohol,
watching you and papa fall apart.
Then peice your selves back together.
But no matter what people would say
I just knew that,
we'll get there someday.
I almost lost you once or twice
My world began to fall
but you came back
a new person
I know you've loved me all along
and i could ask for no better mom.
I am so luck to have you in my life
We struggled so much
And as a family we held together
And I knew that because of you
Holding on every step of the way
We got there today
Copyright ©
GurlyTye
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2005-04-12 13:40:53]
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Re: We'll Get There Someday
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by sride686 on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 03:23:18 AM AEST
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| I don’t know why no one has commented on this poem. It is good work and reminds me of my on life. Life is a struggle and we forget how much our family has done for us. Its nice to see someone write about that love that’s stronger then all loves. My only thought is that most people come on to read romantic poems and that’s why the haven’t commented on this one. Thank you for yet another work of art and keep it up so I can read more. there is never a bad poem, for every work you do shows your heart and what’s going on in your life…….Steve |
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Re: We'll Get There Someday
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 04:51:44 PM AEST
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I think there may be alot of truth to what Steve said ... I also believe this is one of your best so far.
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