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The Beast
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 12:01:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The beast is caged & locked within,
Never allowing his reign of terror to begin,
I hear him roar in the dead of the night,
To keep him hidden is a constant fight.
He once ruled me & my life,
Making me believe I was depressions wife,
That I was worthless & that nobody cared,
Deep into my dark soul he stared.
He is powerful & takes pleasure in killing,
He laughs as he sees your blood spilling,
He has killed many others you see,
& this hideous creature stays inside me.
I can hear him as he tries to escape,
My damaged mind he often tries to rape,
I am at his mercy as he takes control,
I beg him not to once again steal my soul.
I struggle to keep him contained,
As my sanity is already bruised & stained,
His temper has taken its toll on my mind,
Never a way out of this nightmare can I find.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-04-12 12:01:20]
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Re: The Beast
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 12:19:28 PM AEST
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A really good poem, I really like this one. The way you deal with the beast as your demons is clever and very well versed with excellent rhyme.
Good Job!
Will
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Re: The Beast
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 12:42:37 PM AEST
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| Hey there Pix! Long time no see! ;-) This is well versed and an excellent expression of the beast that lingers within. Another great poem! joni :-) |
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Re: The Beast
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by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 12:53:14 PM AEST
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| This one is chilling.. and can be interpreted in many ways... i liked though it made me feel sad in a way... good write |
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Re: The Beast
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:15:21 PM AEST
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very emotional write and I feel that your strength will over come that beast my friend
Michelle
Im always here when you need me |
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Re: The Beast
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by Dri on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 02:05:43 PM AEST
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| stunning. this one chilled me to the bone. you have real talent, but i'm pretty sure you know that by now. |
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Re: The Beast
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by Dri on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 02:09:23 PM AEST
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| stunning. this one chilled me to the bone. you have real talent, but i'm pretty sure you know that by now. |
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Re: The Beast
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 08:01:14 PM AEST
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Pixie this is a thought provoking immensely dark poem. Depression is hard to contain, but hang tuff my friend. You're doing a really good job. I'm here for u my friend.
Otherwise a sad, but very well conveyed piece of poetry.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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Re: The Beast
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 01:43:58 AM AEST
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Wow..it is astounding..really a great expression of the violent beast within,
wonderful pixie..I wish more strength
to you..hugs :-) venkat |
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Re: The Beast
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 12:31:58 PM AEST
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A beauty of a poem then y not look who
wrote it, remember the beast is only as
powerful as they hold the key 2 it's cage . . .
(((((pix)))))
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: The Beast
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 04:22:45 PM AEST
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Krissie, im sorry if i haven't commented on you're lovely writes much LOL.
Anyways i really liked this, it was dark with an amazing imagery to it.
Jane |
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