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No One
Contributed by
jaycee
on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:32:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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No one that knows me
No one that sees me
No one pursues me
No one to please me
No one to care that
I'm at my wits end
No one who wants to
be my own girfriend
No one appreciates
a forty year old teen
No one gives up on
that big ol' house dream
No one who likes that
big shiny Death Star
No one who dreams that
they'd travel that far
No one to sing with
No one to talk with
No one to dance with
No one to walk with
No one's shoulder
that I can cry on
No one to sit with
waiting for the dawn
No one to shoulder
some of my life's pains
No one to help me
without counting their gains
No one who listens well
No one who calms fears
No one who helps me
No one who dries tears
No one to care when
death's looking so fine
No one to stop me
when I'm crossing that line
No one to like me
No one to miss me
No one to hold me
No one to kiss me
No one...
Copyright ©
jaycee
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2005-04-12 09:32:00]
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Re: No One
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 10:12:54 AM AEST
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What a heartfelt and well written poem. I have felt that way before and dont give up love can find you when you least expect it!!
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Re: No One
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by Vermillion on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:10:04 AM AEST
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a very emotional and sad poem with excellent rythem and rhyme. keep writing!
~vermillion~ |
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Re: No One
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by blue_angel on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:33:27 AM AEST
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im so sorry you have to feel like this... i feel the same way everyday. ppl dont know what it's like to feel so alone, that no one likes you or will miss you wen you leave. its a hard thing to deal with. i really like your poem. and you should try being more positive about yourself, give yourself a little more credit now and then. you are important, i hope you realize that.
luv n hugs
jennie* |
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Re: No One
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 12:58:49 AM AEST
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Very, very well written. I know this may sound corny but I can feel your pain (or the pain) because I have been down this road b4 and oh so too recently. There has got to be someone. I have hope again and so can you (or who this is about...considering the possibility that it could be fiction). Hang in...
As a friend of mine always says, "Peace". |
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Re: No One
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by spazz911 on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 07:54:52 PM AEST
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im sry that u feel like this.. if its ne consolation i feel the exact same way...but i hope that there will be someone soon...dont give up
~kc~ |
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Re: No One
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by mylady on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 02:01:50 AM AEST
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I like this one. some time i feel like that.
am also a 40 year old teen. lol |
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Re: No One
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 07:07:53 PM AEST
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Sorry...I can;t say that I have felt this way or that I understand how it feels but I enjoyed the poem....
Thank you...
Jenni |
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