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Clandestine
Contributed by
frustratedwitch
on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:56:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Silently,
He watched her…
Her body glowing beneath the kiss
Of the breaking dawn
Rapt under a deep slumber
Tangled sheets concealed her bareness but
The untainted, innocent beauty
Could not be masked
The mist of passion lingered still
Obscuring the view of truth and sense
What is wrong when there is pleasure?
What is right when there is pain?
He breathed her scent and
Her echoing moans filled his ears once more
Skin against skin is ignescent…
They are beginning to burn
As the darkness of the night sheaths the sky
He makes love to her in the moon’s dark side
Though they seek more than just restricted bliss
Forever they must remain… hidden
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2005-04-12 07:56:09]
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Re: Clandestine
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:33:34 PM AEST
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| this is very good... i don't tend to like the sappy poems, but this has an element of realism to it that i like. keep writing! |
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Re: Clandestine
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 12:23:52 AM AEST
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I'm an amateur myself and not a critic. So all I can say is the same thing "keep writing".
Very good poem and I could "see" the realism too :) |
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