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The Path Of A Falling Star
Contributed by
garyforawhile
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Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 03:17:07 AM in AEST
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The Path Of A Falling Star
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inside a dream
a thoughtless mind
floating in time
no sense of sight
time unknown
it passed me by
too little too late
i've lost my place
the lifeless mind
it shines no more
it faded away
as it fell from the sky
missed the best part
its all over now
no time to explain
for missed opportunity
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Re: The Path Of A Falling Star
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by unforgiven on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 05:55:23 AM AEST
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this is a really great poem. it made me think about quite a few things. excellent write and if that's what happens from lack of sleep, u should definately stay up. lol
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Re: The Path Of A Falling Star
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by Ada on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:18:39 AM AEST
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| Nice poem... I'm looking forward for you to read my poems : ) Do leave some comments... |
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Re: The Path Of A Falling Star
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by bittersweet315 on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:13:05 PM AEST
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| I like this poem.. it creates really cool imagery, at least for me anyway, and i like the symbolism here... props yo |
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