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Let me go
Contributed by
Gothchyk
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Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:06:46 AM in AEST
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I knew he’d be hurt
But now I don’t give a ****
He knew he’d get burnt
When his dreams I did chuck
It could never be
Our minds have different wills
And he couldn’t see
All the impossible hills
My trust doesn’t come easy
Dark secrets kept inside
I know it may sound cheesy
But from you I feel the need to hide
You know nothing of my life
And of the love that I have found
I no longer stare at that knife
And my walls they still do surround
I will not be broken
And I won’t remain silent
These words I have spoken
I say not to be violent
I should never have told you
But now that you know
I don’t know what else to do
But ask you to please let me go
Copyright ©
Gothchyk
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2005-04-12 01:06:46]
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Re: Let me go
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by unforgiven on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 02:27:37 AM AEST
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this is a great poem. so angry and emotional and i can understand everything your saying in it. i can understand what it's like to not feel like you can trust everyone and i'm glad you wrote the feeling so well in this poem.
excellent write!!
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Re: Let me go
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by skadmatrix on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 02:24:12 AM AEST
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| this is a really powerfull poem, and it gets to me, ill just have to say great write =) |
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Re: Let me go
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 04:06:53 AM AEST
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Wow.
What an emotional coctail.
Some interesting concepts, here.
Great write.
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Re: Let me go
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by Laksha on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:10:31 AM AEST
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| I don't know how it happened, but when I typed in "your-poetry.com" I came straight to your poem. I marvelled at it- it fit my moment so well. Then I saw you were the author and was amazed...I don't know what else to say, my friend, other than good write and yeah, I agree that the porch swing sounds like a good setting for us right now. |
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Re: Let me go
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 04:51:02 PM AEST
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I'm favoring the 3rd stanza most, but the whole poem is good. Shows lots of emotion, and I can visualize where you're coming from. Keep writing.
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Re: Let me go
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 08:55:02 AM AEST
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i can relate to not trusting others. It's like something inside needs a place where it can always hide. It hurts when you finally give in to trusting another and then in the end you always get hurt because people are used to treating others like dirt. I liked this poem alot. great job, keep writing..
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