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The Liar In My Life..
Contributed by
desire
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Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 12:55:58 AM in AEST
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he came into my life like a breath of fresh air
just when my life seemed to be going no where
he said all the right things I needed to hear
and was so humble and sincere
always attentive to my every thing
I welcomed what this relationship would bring
a kindred spirit he seemed to be
the idea man made just for me
we were compatible in many ways
and I grew closer to him each and every day
long talks just sharing our stories
and for getting about any of our worries
life seemed to be do good
everything between us seemed understood
but one day I got this feeling down in my gut
and for a while I was in a rut
there was something not quite right
I was to blind to see the light
this perfect man that I thought I knew
had some secrets and more than a few
he flirted with other women when away from me
an because I was kind of a loner he didn't think id ever see
he gave his phone number out to anyone who would ask
now all his lies are being unmasked
he hid behind a persona and preyed on me
taking advantage of my feeling lonely
he couldn't even talk to me because he knew
that I was utterly and completely through
I try not to make the same mistake twice in a row
I cut my loses and let go
in this life sometimes you never know
when or when not to let you heart show
some take advantage and some are real
it could be a good or bad ordeal
when its truly truly real maybe you will know
my only advice is to take it real slow
I just happen to meet the wrong one
but love for me is not completely undone
one day maybe I will find someone true to me
one day, maybe
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Re: The Liar In My Life..
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by Cupid on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:07:37 AM AEST
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Ooh! That smarts!
Yeah, guys can be jerks sometimes. The key is to look through their eyes. Don't gaze into them, that'll only make things worse.
And if they look to their right while they appear to be pulling out a memory, you KNOW that they're lying.
I hope that helps, desire.
Lovely poem! |
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Re: The Liar In My Life..
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:20:37 AM AEST
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I can tottally relate to this write. Sounds like my ex husband.
A masterpeice even tho sad.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Liar In My Life..
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by Vermillion on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:41:12 AM AEST
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women want a prince charming and all they seem to get is a jester....excellent write. thanx for sharing. deffinatley stirs up some emotions
~vermillion~ |
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Re: The Liar In My Life..
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by unforgiven on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 02:34:13 AM AEST
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wonderful poem! i know what it's like to see only the pefect guy and be so into this idea of him that you don't really see what's going on with him until ur in really deep. i loved this poem and hope to hear more from you soon!
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Re: The Liar In My Life..
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:50:44 AM AEST
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Ha, i so know what you mean by this write.
Well done on pointing such a true fact.
Jane |
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