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Just Notice Me,
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
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Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:36:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I see you everyday
Because I go to the place where you work
I go to the place
So I can see your face
I've liked you for so long
But its terribly wrong
Because your so much older
Which makes everything so much bolder
I dont think you know my name
Which has brought most shame
I dont think you even know I exist
I've seen all the girls you've kissed
And wondered why cant that just be me
I wish you could just see
Just how much I like you
I thought this feeling would just pass through
But I've liked you for years
To see you with other girls brings me too tears
I wish you'd notice me
Because I really like you
I wish you could just see
Just notice me,
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Re: Just Notice Me,
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by shelby on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:48:25 PM AEST
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I felt this your longing and wishing he might notice you you never know, you did a good job with this
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Re: Just Notice Me,
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by Cupid on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:51:20 PM AEST
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Oh, man. I've had this same problem. So I know what this feels like.
This is a great poem, sick_n_twisted. You're going places. : )
I hope he notices you sometime in the near future. Just be sure that you don't follow him to the point of stalking. 'Cos stalking is just sick.
Sorry, had to mention that. It makes sense, good advice.
Anyway, not to worry my friend. He'll notice you one way or another. ; ) |
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Re: Just Notice Me,
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by bigtig6269 on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:57:46 PM AEST
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| word of advice from a guy... do something to make him notice you. Go straight up and talk to him or do something to catch his attention. good write, and good luck |
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Re: Just Notice Me,
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 12:55:47 PM AEST
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I liked your poem, but I think you need to move on with your life, find someone closer to your age and give them a chance. This is just my opinion, I'm sorry I can't be supportive
but i've been in a simular situation and the longer you hang on, the more pain you'll recieve. Once again, I did enjoy your poem.
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Re: Just Notice Me,
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by sick_n_twisted on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 08:28:36 PM AEST
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| i know how u feel i like (love) and he's way older it suck's and he thinks im so young and stuff |
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Re: Just Notice Me,
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by angel_eyes70 on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 01:31:36 AM AEST
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Nice Write But Sorry Sister Get On With your Life, Its Hard Liking Someone Much Older Than You....Trust Me I Know From Experience
*Hugs And Kisses*
Kimmy |
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