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Bleeding Purity
Contributed by
essentially9
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Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 09:21:58 PM in AEST
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Bleeding Purity
My heart bleeds blackened blood
That has not felt the bliss of love.
Yet, the icy blood is just as pure
As the constant hate it endures.
The scars that mar my wrists
Compensate for the love missed.
The wounds bleed the negativity
Of lies that are still believed.
My dreams will never come true,
Because I'll never get through.
My hopes now slowly drowns
In the reasons never found.
I've lost too much blood
That's never felt the bliss of love,
And the blood loss of lust wasn't enough.
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2005-04-11 21:21:58]
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Re: Bleeding Purity
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 09:31:37 PM AEST
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hmm...Jen..I said the title was pweety..and it is...now did that say anything for the poem itself...umm...no...because this poem is beautiful.....and way past pweety....As always...Amazing job Jen =]
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Re: Bleeding Purity
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by Tru2Myself on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 10:13:15 PM AEST
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Beautiful. I love it. Very sad. I can feel the emotion. Beautiful. I like your word use... mar... what a great word. Great poem.
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Re: Bleeding Purity
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 06:58:20 AM AEST
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Jen this is a very well portrayed immensely dark poem. Thought provoking and very deep.
The verses flow very well and the image u cast in the readers head is vivid and dark.
Flawless to say the least. Another great write Jen. Well done.
Hugs,
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Re: Bleeding Purity
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:03:57 AM AEST
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So sad but great writing as always.
hang tuff, my dear friend as we all luv u.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Bleeding Purity
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 12:19:47 PM AEST
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powerful, dark and deep, well written *hugs*
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Re: Bleeding Purity
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by fielding88 on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 08:50:58 PM AEST
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| Ouch. It was painful in a way to read this. lol, not meaning it was bad, just that i felt sad at the subject matter and the words spoken here. I got such a painful sense of drowning in your emotions here, and the conclusions you've come to are not melodramatic or anything, but rather seemingly from sheer experience. You truly have a way of writing that just insipires and captivates, no matter what you write about. I've had these feelings myself, but never to such a strong degree, and i don;t know how else to say it, but this was an amazing write. |
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