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Do I really Deserve this?

Contributed by mysterious on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 08:53:11 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Do I really deserve what I already have, because someone is making me feel as if I shouldn't be loved,
Everytime I hear from him we end up fighting, what am I really losing because this bomb keeps Igniting?
I'm losing one of the best friends I ever had, because of a relationship that's driving me mad,
Why can't we rewrite our past, instead of having to live it so rough?
I know why we can't, it's because of a stupid situation that we call love!
It destroyed a 'special bond' that I had with him, a bond that I thought couldn't be broken,
But I was wrong and it did, now it just stings,
Because the pain that we go through, when we lose someone we love,
Breaks us down, that all we want to say is that we've had enough,
So tell me do I really deserve the special bond I once had?
Because if I didn't, what's the point of living, if your going to be mad?

Copyright © mysterious ... [ 2005-04-11 20:53:11]
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Re: Do I really Deserve this? (User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:20:26 PM AEST
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I know why we can't, it's because of a stupid situation that we call love!

i like that....nice write

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