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thoughts of you
Contributed by
bigj
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Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 07:24:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Immaturity Is what caused us to split apart,
I can’t handle this endless pain within my heart.
You led me on to something that was never true,
It crushed my heart and now we are through.
I changed my entire way of life for your own benefit,
I became someone I wasn’t and got nothing out of it.
Now I see your true colors,
And I have noticed you are no different from the others.
Somehow I have to subside with this pain,
Every time I see you a little of me goes insane.
I don’t know what to say or do,
But it is so damn hard to forget about you.
The more I try the worse I get,
Getting to know you is actually the one thing I regret.
Written by: Justin ford
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bigj
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2005-04-11 19:24:37]
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Re: thoughts of you
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 07:30:00 PM AEST
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| very brilliantly done. your first posts certainly put mine to shame. im glad i discovered your poetry, im lacking in reading good poetry these days. welcome to the site by the way. =] |
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Re: thoughts of you
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 07:43:15 PM AEST
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Another great write justin...I am seeing great talent here...and really Im glad to...this was great...now on to your third piece...
Clark |
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Re: thoughts of you
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by Noelia on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:57:53 AM AEST
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| I like ur poem, its good. Ur a good writer. |
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