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Butterflys and shattered dreams
Contributed by
bttrflynajar
on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 06:45:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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floating on in a summer sky
the lonely butterfly
where false beauty
is her only way to live
and all hope dies
she has nothing to give
a delicate sight
made nothing right
alone now dieing in a jar
where her dreams never get far
an analogy
the epitome
.....
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bttrflynajar
... [
2005-04-11 18:45:06]
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Re: Butterflys and shattered dreams
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by Jyssvw on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 06:48:21 PM AEST
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very cool write, i liked it alot, i liked getting my own meaning out of it.
good stuff
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Re: Butterflys and shattered dreams
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 07:37:59 PM AEST
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| excellent title first of all, and very good piece. im glad i read this one. i especially liked the first stanza. |
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Re: Butterflys and shattered dreams
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by electrique_poet on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 08:10:32 PM AEST
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this was amazing, i really enjoyed reading it, i love the vagueness of each stanza and each line, i was able to picture more precisely a meaning all my own, a great write
... in words electrique |
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Re: Butterflys and shattered dreams
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:11:42 PM AEST
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| Very discriptive, and beautiful.. Loved it. Thanks. Shey |
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Re: Butterflys and shattered dreams
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 11:37:44 PM AEST
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| excellent |
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