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IX
Contributed by
savingmarion
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Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 05:12:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I form obscurity to hide my voice,
In pages of grief and shame.
I do my best to stain the words,
That hold the cry in my name.
It is like we are a lifeless kiss,
With stones between our teeth.
And with all of our insults drawn,
A demon’s shadow lies beneath.
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2005-04-11 17:12:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: IX
(User Rating: 1 ) by freckle on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 09:26:52 PM AEST (User
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I like your writing style.
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Re: IX
(User Rating: 1 ) by chazthepoet on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 05:20:59 AM AEST (User
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creative great word choices
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