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Purple Dots
Contributed by
bittersweet315
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Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 03:23:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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purple dots
on my pillowcase
where i lay my head
where i rest
they make patterns across
the beige background
they get bigger, smaller,
change in shade
like each one is a thought, a dream,
and together they evolve
to form a design
that surpasses any one individually
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2005-04-11 15:23:30]
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Re: Purple Dots
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 05:33:57 PM AEST
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| Wow. Wonderful word picture. Too bad this poem hasn't been more viewed. |
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Re: Purple Dots
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by twick on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 10:27:28 PM AEST
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| So I'm wondering what the purple dots are, hmm but great job because you got me wondering. |
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