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Tenderness
Contributed by
Graypoem
on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 08:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Like the moon that reflects from the skies
Like the heart that is meant to mend
Like the distant Of obstacle love
Like the pleasant of the rays
Beaming down upon me
Always touching a part of me
Nothing in my heart has ever caught my attention
Like the way you have
The tenderness in my heart
Came from loving you
For so long
It's just to bad that we can't be one
I care in a way that keeps me holding on
In my heart it's so very strong
Copyright ©
Graypoem
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2002-12-22 08:20:00]
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Re: Tenderness
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 06:49:10 PM AEST
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aww this is a really good poem, i like this, keep them comming..
Mit Liebe und Umarmungen
Ali |
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Re: Tenderness
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by OreO on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 03:08:51 PM AEST
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Aww this is very sad my friend....i hope that whoever this is written about that they saw this because it's beautiful....and it's so sad...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Tenderness
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by venkat on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 05:01:53 AM AEST
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| artistically beautiful poem with a touch of sadness. Fine.wish you best of luck in the new year..Venkat |
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Re: Tenderness
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by Graypoem on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 02:28:26 AM AEST
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| thank u and wish u luck too |
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