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Out Cold
Contributed by
Baronhawk
on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 09:48:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I am out cold
by the roadside
in the rain
shivering my pains
punched out by life
left to freeze
on my own
without recourse
just a mountain of doubts.
They shut me out
life did
left me behind
aimless upon land
sinking upon seas
alone within this pit
a bottomless abyss
to suffer without bliss
in the darkness of hate.
It was a drastic fall
the calamity complete
no one to understand my thoughts
nor any to catch my fall
but a long, long drop
off the edge
into the endless nights
lonely days
the empty sadness in between.
I am bleeding life
yet no one cares
no one dared
no one to find me
thus I remain
ever lost
ever always
in this maze
the labyrinthine hallways.
What one may ask
in life a chance
to find redemption
or a place to rest
a home to belong to
a trade or repast
a love to cling to
understanding at best
some happiness due
and peace at mind.
But I am out cold
punched out by life
left out in the rain
to shiver in my pains
shut out by the world
I find no repast
no meager understanding
nor a measure of rest
left alone to fall
into the darkest pit
I remain withall
hurt,bleeding,
lost and incomplete.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
... [
2005-04-11 09:48:55]
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Re: Out Cold
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:00:14 AM AEST
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You may perhaps made yourself that way dear friend.
This is so heart-rending a beautiful song that one could weep tears. But below the debir are sproutihg flowers, little flowers of tenderness and love that you may not notice.
Gut-wrenching and beautifu song this.
Take heart! HE is risen.
Cheers
Elizabeth Dandy |
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Re: Out Cold
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:10:51 PM AEST
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It was a drastic fall
the calamity complete
no one to understand my thoughts
nor any to catch my fall
but a long, long drop
off the edge
into the endless nights
lonely days
the empty sadness in between.
A painful read, so tragic, but so real. I felt this one. You compsed this quiet well. Loves it!! |
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