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~ SiCkEnEd ~
Contributed by
Delusions
on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 02:11:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Does it feel good,
all the power you hold over me?
Do you have fun,
listening to me beg for you to love me?
Do you feel like god,
as you pull the strings on my emotions?
Dangling the love I crave so deeply before my face,
then stealing it back again,
denying that it ever existed.
I am weak from trying to earn your love,
I am famished from giving up all of myself to you....
for you to do with what you please,
thinking that maybe this time I will be deserving.
Thinking that maybe this time I have given up enough of my soul,
to satisfy you into loving me in return.
But like always,
you turn your back on my pleading eyes.
You take back your promises of an eternity together...
I failed to satisfy you and I must be punished.
I am sickened that you think its okay to treat me this way.
But more than anything,
I am sickened with myself...
sickened that I cant make you love me,
no matter how hard I try.
Oh god...
I hate myself for not being good enough for you.
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Re: ~ SiCkEnEd ~
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 02:58:01 AM AEST
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leave this person to their own sickness and let them find their own way.
I know these are strong words but someone like this can never luv u cause they don't luv themselves. I know, I've been there. this person is going down and wants to take u with them.
realize that u r much too good to put up with such ways that u r being treated.
they need help but u can't do it as it takes a professional to get one thru such horrid actions.
Have mercy on yourself and clear the way so someone real can luv u.
Faith, hope, joy, peace, prayer,
emy |
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Re: ~ SiCkEnEd ~
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by unforgiven on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 04:07:22 AM AEST
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that's an excellent poem hun. i know what u have been going through wid this whole 'relationship' and i'm glad u funally got it out on paper.
another beautiful poem.
luv ya hun
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Re: ~ SiCkEnEd ~
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by kylie_fan87 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:03:44 AM AEST
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| After reading this poem it is clear that you are begging this person but in a way that you hate them. You must always keep in mind though that just because you hate this person for wat they have done to you...never hate yourself. The anger in this poem shows just how much this person meant to you. I myself was in a situation where i loved a person but hated them at the same time. You WERE good enough for this person, but this person wasnt good enough for you, be thankful that you are now free from the oppression that this person had cast over you. Remember this, he can control your feelings, but only if you let him |
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