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A Horrid Dream
Contributed by
smiley_jennyxoxo
on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:28:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I’ve found you
You seemed like the perfect man
But deep inside you, you have no clue
That you have been sucked into a black hole
It could be your soul
Do you hide in a dark place?
With no love, outside your hole?
Has it become my fault
That you murdered your parents
Have you become part of a cult?
You’re being pulled by a strong current
As you seem to picture death
Of others as you confess
That you secretly use meth
You say you’ve talked to a sorceress
You have had enough of the pain within you
As I start to believe you
Are your feelings really true?
I have been interrogated, ‘til they were blue
About what I knew of all this
I have denied any knowledge
Of becoming an accomplice
Your pain draws you to the edge
The truth within bears a strong weight
On my shoulders, it’s bringing me down
I’ve become scared, as I await my fate
An evil wind has blown
You far away from here
Since my heart’s obtained a tear
You jump aboard an airplane
As the passengers fill with fear
You spot your parents and siblings
They all yell as you stab through their hearts
They all lie there in their own cold blood
You stab yourself in the stomach, as a start
Then you shoot yourself in the head, you fall into a coma
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2005-04-10 23:28:32]
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Re: A Horrid Dream
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:33:28 PM AEST
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I'd call this a nightmare.
very sad but written well.
huggs,
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Re: A Horrid Dream
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:56:51 PM AEST
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Wow! Heck of a dream. I agree with Emy. It's more like a nightmare.
Very good poem though.
Makes me want to tune in next week to see if he comes out of the coma? ;-}
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