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Sonnet Of The Treasured Dissatisfaction
Contributed by
BackToYou
on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:19:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Never let me overlook the miracle
That is your picturesque smile, or the meter
of your unattended chest against
the rise and fall of mine during our deepest hour.
I am daunted by this feeling of being, in this jungle,
A forgotten fortress, my greatest deplore
Is having no garden, pomace, or ornaments
For the anthem of my fatal attraction.
If you are my unlawful paragon,
If you are my fidelity, my heavy-heart ache,
If I am a star, and you alone the eventide,
Pray you, never let me omit what I have attained,
And transgress the laws of your house
With the ashes of my rebellious holiday.
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2005-04-10 22:19:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sonnet Of The Treasured Dissatisfaction
(User Rating: 1 ) by SocialMisfit on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 08:22:58 PM AEST (User
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hmm interesting poem, kinda liked the word useage tho it is slightly overdone, keep it up there good.
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