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Pitter, Patter
Contributed by
TheForgottenMelody
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Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:45:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This revolving door
Is finally stuck again
And I'm so happy
I just want her more
With every verse that I write
I know it's sappy
Honest simple words
These simple and stupid rhymes
I want them to show
Now I'm feeling sure
That I can give her my love
I want her to know
Copyright ©
TheForgottenMelody
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2005-04-10 21:45:36]
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Re: Pitter, Patter
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by Stew on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:55:30 PM AEST
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I LOVE IT! IT JUST....MAKES SO MUCH SENSE. SOMETIMES I CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM. KEEP WRITING.
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Re: Pitter, Patter
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by BackToYou on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:29:39 PM AEST
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its short but sweet. i guess when everything is right you don't need to say much. its very lovely
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