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...and down I fell...
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:34:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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No more days pass
my world does stand still,
my life is brought forth
and my heart it does fill
So what don't you get?
when I talk to you
that my screaming your name
is my love breaking through
Your picture in my hand
I rip it in two
then drop it and cry
watch your face crinkle through
tiny pieces you are now
as I stand upon a windy bough
my hands unclench,a nd your face flies free
so;mewhere far away from me
but as your pieces blow away
my hands reach out and down I fall
I lost my balence, my grip on life
feeling only death could end my strife
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spazz911
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2005-04-10 21:34:25]
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Re: ...and down I fell...
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by hrpuffnstuff on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:50:27 PM AEST
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I lost my balence, my grip on life
feeling only death could end my strife
aw spazz911
that is so sad, fully understand
love hx |
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Re: ...and down I fell...
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by blue_angel on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:41:14 AM AEST
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gosh u took my poetry talent from me! ur an amazing writer! but dont think that because of him this is the end. if it is meant to be then it will happen. if not then it wont. its just the way it is. i kno he confuses u but things usually work out in the end for the best
chin up.... luv n hugs
jennie* |
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