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The Innocence of Memories
Contributed by
essentially9
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Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:07:51 PM in AEST
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The Innocence of Memories
The memories are reliving
The misery of my heart dying.
My past bleeds insecurities
Even when just a memory.
The words echo in my head
With every hurtful word said.
All of my fears come alive
With reasons for tears cried.
My heart breaks in two
With never having you.
My emotions drown me
In dreams never to be
A beloved memory...
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essentially9
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2005-04-10 21:07:51]
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Re: The Innocence of Memories
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:29:36 PM AEST
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ah..very nice Jen...(guessing this is what came of your help verse in mine)As always jen you seem to over do yourself...hmm...great job..
Clark=] |
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Re: The Innocence of Memories
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:52:38 PM AEST
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A beloved memory....i loved that. such a beauty of an ending here, and the description you built of said memory throughout the poem were just as well done.
My past bleeds insecurities
Even when just a memory.
I loved that part most of all from this. I love the kind of topics you choose to write about, this one was surprisingly unique to me. Great stuff yet again. |
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Re: The Innocence of Memories
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by venkat on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 01:56:36 AM AEST
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| I know how such emotions drown a person in dreams..wellwritten Jen..hugs :-) venkat |
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Re: The Innocence of Memories
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 09:46:15 AM AEST
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Brings sadness 2 my heart 4 your pain a real
heart felt peice of writting beautiful as always
your a true seasoned artist, a gem 2 behold.
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: The Innocence of Memories
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 06:25:23 PM AEST
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Jen this is a very well expressed and deeply stated poem. An outstanding piece of poetry nothing short of what I expect from u my dear friend. A truly superb write as always. U never cease to amaze me. Keep up the great work.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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Re: The Innocence of Memories
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:07:29 AM AEST
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So sad friend but great writing.
Very touching and deep.
huggs,
emy |
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