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She Laid

Contributed by DecapitateMyPain on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:49:28 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

She laid on the ground
Staring at the stars in the sky
The answers were found
As she wondered why

The old sad days
That were so intense and strong
Have now been delayed
Now, never to be lifelong

All of the fights
All of the hated
It so was not right but,
It made her feel betrayed

She thought she was not cherished
She felt no pride at all
Until it came to this one day
Where she took the fall

She fell to the ground
Looking right up to the stars
Her answers were now found
As she looked deep in her scars

She started cutting her wrist
Then deeper she'd slice
Right through her stomach
Went the knife

She cried in tears
As she was on her knees
Asking for forgiveness
As she would bleed

She knew where she was going
She knew from the start
All of her family
They'd be apart

She died painfully
She died slowly too
She burned in the fire
While her whole life was through

Copyright © DecapitateMyPain ... [ 2005-04-10 20:49:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: She Laid (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:27:46 PM AEST
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This is a good poem. A nice and twiztid touch.

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