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Please... Never Forget
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 04:22:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The thornes that rap around my neck
Suffocating my life of nothing
Creating the wounds that never heal
Only adding to my pain and suffering
The veins that are filled with hate
That breeds in my blackened heart
The blood drips from my dried eyes
From always being alone and slowly falling apart
My soul has been trampled on
And it's never going to stop
My life is nothing but forgotten
As are the scars that rot
My life is tainted with love loss
And stained with the venom of her lips
The poison that keeps me alive
As long as my heart does'nt rip
...
And I want you to know
My love for you
is an unforgetable feeling that I have always ment
...
I will always love you
Please
Never forget
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-04-10 16:22:42]
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Re: Please... Never Forget
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by Tru2Myself on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 07:15:42 PM AEST
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I love this. Its absolutely beautiful. Amazing. I love the way you used ryming.
Lauren |
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Re: Please... Never Forget
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:00:12 PM AEST
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A very well conveyed piece of poetry. Expressed deeply and so well. The verses flowed well and the image u cast in the readers head is amazing. A truly awesome write.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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Re: Please... Never Forget
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:28:27 PM AEST
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| thanks for making all of my poems look horrible compared to this one. =] |
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Re: Please... Never Forget
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 03:22:40 AM AEST
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This is really beautiful...
Passionate, and very well expressed.
Awed by your work,
~kt |
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Re: Please... Never Forget
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by heartbroken4ever on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 08:43:08 PM AEST
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I promise I'll never forget and don't you forget that I'll always love you tooo
Love your angel
Amber |
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