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So At Last
Contributed by
Tru2Myself
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Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 03:40:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Laying in bed with a huge smile on my face
I can't stop thinking about you
I just had the best night of my life
And it was spent in your arms
All I wanted was to stay that was forever
In your loving embrace
I can feel how much you care
You whisper in my ear and kiss my cheek
I haven't been this happy in so long
So at last I have someone who cares
Someone who will always be there
Through the good and the bad
I cant talk to you when I'm sad
You can cheer me up so easily
I've been waiting so long for this
I think about you day and night
Never without a smile
This is what I've always wanted
And at last it's finally mine
So at last I have someone who cares
Someone who will always be there
Through the good and the bad
I can talk to you when I'm sad
You can cheer me up so easily
I've been waiting so long for this
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Re: So At Last
(User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 05:55:08 PM AEST (User
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Wonderful write. Alive and real. The reader can almost feel your joy.
Whisper
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Re: So At Last
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 10:00:58 PM AEST (User
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ah, the spectacular thing about this poem is that i could feel your happiness and excitement. i can feel misery just fine, but feeling something other than that is next to impossible, but that next to impossible thing you have acheived. |
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