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Not Normal
Contributed by
PuppyChow
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Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:54:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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can you see the faces
i see all the time
can your hear the voices
that neither reason nor rhyme
can you touch the evil
im around all the time
can you taste the blood
like lemon or lime
can you smell the terror
as fear crosses the line
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2005-04-10 14:54:59]
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Re: Not Normal
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by purplestary on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 03:19:15 PM AEST
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| this is great. your right...alot of times the ones that just pop up suddenly end up being better then the ones you spend a long time working on or trying to force out. |
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Re: Not Normal
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by Stonedraider23 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 03:20:54 PM AEST
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| good write but it just ends leaves ya out there, but thats me |
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Re: Not Normal
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by sick_n_twisted on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 03:21:11 PM AEST
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| hey...nice poem i like the flow all the way thro |
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Re: Not Normal
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:19:38 PM AEST
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they are better when you dont force it
though some people force it anyway
they come to me randomly as well
good job
i really liked this one
--> Rae |
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