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SHADES OFFEELING
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 12:53:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Love dwells amongst the fools in flight
Bridges between heaven and earths delight
Gateways to wisdom and knowledge begin
Release resentment and hurt from within
Rainbows appear as the sun shines through
Departing rain clouds a bright silver hue
Transforming darkness to light thus healing
A presence lost in shades of feeling
Gold and silver reflect the sun and moon
Along side the stream purple irises bloom
Shades of feeling turns another page
Chapters written let not grief engage
Illusions shimmer bright and true
Chase back the shadows start anew
A new world reflected plant new seeds
All is well in your world move on succeed
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Re: SHADES OFFEELING
(User Rating: 1 ) by mina-1 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 06:01:17 PM AEST (User
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Angel this is an outstanding write. So beautifully written and so inspirational. This poem is a real uplifting one and warms my very heart. Thank u for posting such a beautiful piece of poetry. Well done my friend.
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Re: SHADES OFFEELING
(User Rating: 1 ) by FleurdeSang on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:50:15 PM AEST (User
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Ah, douce ange! It's so good to see you writing again, dear friend. I have missed your words. And what a beautiful addition to my already lengthy list of favorites! Shimmering brilliantly with talent, and warmth! Very inspirational indeed. "Let not grief engage..." Oui, cheri. Let the chapters go on till the book is finished, with only joy and blissful recollections to turn back to. Exquisite piece, one to read over and over again. Douce ange de UK, you never fail to enchant and create such gorgeous images with your words. Thank you so much for sharing this masterpiece with us, and I do hope you shall bless us with your lovely expressions again soon. All my love! Forever,
Your dear friend and avid fan,
Stephy! *hugs* Welcome back. |
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Re: SHADES OFFEELING
(User Rating: 1 ) by bernard on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 03:33:47 AM AEST (User
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SweetAngel you have once again captured a masterpiece in this your brilliant poem. Strangely enough I am not envious of you although I will never be able to write such verse as you it pleases me to be able to read such poems as yours. Love from bernard. |
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Re: SHADES OFFEELING
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 04:29:57 PM AEST (User
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very vivid and imaginate piece. i really enjoyed it. so poetic and the rhyme scheme kept it quaint. great piece. chris |
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Re: SHADES OFFEELING
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 04:33:40 AM AEST (User
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ooh great imagery, a beautiful piece of writing skillfully crafted.
Johnny. |
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Re: SHADES OFFEELING
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 11:04:50 PM AEST (User
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A great masterpeice.
Awesome.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: SHADES OFFEELING
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 12:08:56 AM AEST (User
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~:*beautiful!*:~
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: SHADES OFFEELING
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 04:26:38 PM AEST (User
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Great poem.
Your words are always inspiring |
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Re: SHADES OFFEELING
(User Rating: 1 ) by bernard on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:26:44 AM AEST (User
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A really splendid poem or should I say better a great Philosopical work. This one line stood out for me it is just great, Chase back the shadows start anew, An adage to fir all ages. Start anew. top stars from bernard hugs and love. |
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Re: SHADES OFFEELING
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:19:38 AM AEST (User
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inspirational poetry you said it was, and inspiring it is.
This sort of brings you back to basics, by making you see that there is so much in the natural world that at times we all fail to observe.
Beautiful work angel.
johnny. |
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Re: SHADES OFFEELING
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 07:15:11 PM AEST (User
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marvelously imaginative!!!What a wonderful imagination you have, and your talent for writing is the color of Red........meaning very vivid, very intense, very bright!
Wonderful poem. Really enjoyed reading it.
Warm Love
ConSue |
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