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Earth
Contributed by
AssassinatorGirl
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Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:37:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She fell to the ground, screaming.
No one could hear her desperate pleading.
A cold body reached up its hand,
its fingers crusted by dirt and sand
Pulling her under
Dragging her down
To its cynical lair
with hatred and pain
and sorrow is weaved into her slowly.
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AssassinatorGirl
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2005-04-10 10:37:25]
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Re: Earth
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:30:15 AM AEST
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Assassinatergirl
"sorry I don't like your pen name" I believe you are probbaly a prettry young lady.
Your poem--I liked it
Interesting,but have a question.
Is this girl being draged into the "Nether world"--"Hell" ? Thats about the way I read your poem.Anyway nice write.
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Re: Earth
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 08:38:25 AM AEST
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| This seems to be the discription of a person who struggles with depression. Your title does not quite fit better would have been "Grave" |
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