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Angel
Contributed by
Eclipse
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Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:10:03 AM in AEST
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Look up to the sky, I hear his call,
From this moment, I'll never fall,
Perfected and pure, with eyes of gold,
With one glance I've now been sold
My heart beats fast, my knees grow weak,
He's the one my soul does seek,
Shower me in bliss, with words divine,
How I wish that he were mine
Beautiful is the least that I can say,
Take my hand, and love me I pray,
I look with wonder, what have I found?
A silver-winged angel has touched the ground
Take me in your arms, just hold me tight,
Fate this will be, together in flight,
We'll combine as one, flying in the moonlight,
Soar high over mountains and out of sight.
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Eclipse
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2005-04-10 09:10:03]
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Re: Angel
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by Kie on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:45:45 AM AEST
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Beautiful, romantic and heavenly.
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Re: Angel
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 12:46:28 PM AEST
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Excellent write Good word usage and great flow and rhyme . I enjoyed this very much.
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