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The Journey of Life
Contributed by
theeman
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Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 07:34:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Every day is like yesterday
It is the same from monday to sunday
Everyone is running to win the race
I hope i can keep the pace
Life is different for different people
From the time Adam ate the apple
For some life is sorrow and pain
For some life is happiness and gain
But i dont know how it will end
As i am just in a bend
Where i have found a lode star
Which shines at my goal from afar
I hope i reach this goal of mine
I hope on the way i dont whine
In this world of happiness and sorrow
Will i reach the star i follow?
Copyright ©
theeman
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2005-04-10 07:34:04]
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Re: The Journey of Life
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 07:46:28 AM AEST
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| well done,the rat race, if we could only take time to smell the roses. |
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Re: The Journey of Life
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by Archie on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:02:20 AM AEST
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| This is a good write. (I think you could have lengthened your stanza abit more) The meaning of your poem is true though and heart felt. 4 stars |
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