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Evolution of Everything
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 09:47:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There comes a time
when life and all it is
Seems all that it was
ever meant to be
And at that time
looking in anothers eyes
Suddenly you find yourself
complete
When, in that moment
you're afraid to draw a breath
Fearing it might be the
last you'll ever need
Then, at that moment
the world appears to pause
And you will swear that
you heard Angels sing
~ ~ ~
For everything you are
or were, or ever hope to be
In another's eyes
you'll see with clarity
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2005-04-09 21:47:34]
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Re: Evolution of Everything
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 12:44:36 AM AEST
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A very goiod write and I'm sure it's appreciated.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Evolution of Everything
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 01:46:51 AM AEST
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| Replete with the sorts of things one might feel. Lovely thoughts. |
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Re: Evolution of Everything
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:54:06 AM AEST
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| That is beautiful, I hope to find that some day!! |
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Re: Evolution of Everything
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 03:51:00 AM AEST
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You always leave something
to think about.
You're deep, man.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Evolution of Everything
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:16:49 AM AEST
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This is good.
It isn't quite as earth shattering as some of yours, but that is what makes it kinda special.
I don't know why...but I sort of hear this as a whisper... It's weird. lol.
Anyway, beautiful write, as always...
*hugs tons*
Phil xxx
(Who thought she'd write a weird comment) |
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Re: Evolution of Everything
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by Kie on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:49:42 AM AEST
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Your poem is elegant and beautiful beyond words.
Kie |
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Re: Evolution of Everything
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by FleurdeSang on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:03:58 PM AEST
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Could we ever find completion by just a person's touch? Can we see ourselves like they see us: flawless beings that can only be illusions...? Emotional indeed, cheri Scott. It seems as though through a lover's eyes, we are something that we never thought we'd be... Yet, this could be within even a perfect strangers' eyes. The mystery shall stay a mystery... trying to decipher something so beautiful would be to destroy the enchantment.
Now look what you made me do, Nazzy! I've rambled again, and didn't even notice it! lol. Well, of course it was beautiful beyond compare, of course it was utterly flawless, of course it painted gorgeous images... And, but of course, you have, once again, left me breathless and marvelling at your talent. Thank you so much for sharing this with us, cheri. One of your shorter writes, but profound and heart-warming all the same. Merci beaucoup once more. All my love. Forever,
Votre petite fleur,
Stephy. *who's blushing for talking so damn much, lol.* |
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Re: Evolution of Everything
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by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:36:11 PM AEST
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| Yay!!! another great poem. |
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Re: Evolution of Everything
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:46:21 PM AEST
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| Simply beautiful and beautifully simple, yet bursting with truth and meaning. Loves it!! |
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Re: Evolution of Everything
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:36:51 PM AEST
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A soundly excellent, simple but expressive piece of work. The message is very true, and though it has been said before, it's said better here.
Andrew |
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Re: Evolution of Everything
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 06:39:47 PM AEST
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you've captured a precious moment in time and made it forever alive for all who read this beautiful poem, it breathes:) hugs n' love nessa
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