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Dancing Blind
Contributed by
Azanna
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Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 06:14:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Loving only you
Dancing blind on a high wire
and no safety net
Copyright ©
Azanna
... [
2005-04-09 18:14:38]
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Re: Dancing Blind
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 07:07:41 PM AEST
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good, i like it
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Dancing Blind
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 09:39:41 PM AEST
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A very bold and powerful haiku.
You have fit impossible amounts of information into this...it is so rich and layered... and what an emotive coctail.
Incredulous imagery...dancing blind...on a high wire..no safety net...
Thought provoking.
I really really enjoyed this piece...wow...
Thank you for the high. |
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Re: Dancing Blind
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:44:13 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem! I reallyyyyyyy wish I could write haiku, but I have no talent whatsoever for it! This is amazing! And it conveys so much emotion... you have true talent! |
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