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How?
Contributed by
Azanna
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Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 06:08:25 PM in AEST
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How?
Azanna (12-14-04)
How can I repay you for this hurt you have given me?
Oh...
That I could
I'd give you such exquisite misery
How do I make you realize what truly you have done?
Embracing darkness
Blackened heart
Your face turned from the sun
How will you atone to a loving heart which you have torn asunder?
Now a heap of ash
Whilst you go forth
In search of further plunder.
How can I repay you for every premeditated lie?
Which fell so smoothly
From your lips
An ever ready alibi
How could you not ever see that I had given you my all?
Your eyes now blinded
Where once you caught me
Now I fall
How can you not know that you have taken away my trust?
With deceiving ways
A silvered tongue
Our love, once dear, now turned to rust.
How could I not know that I was so foolishly naive?
Just one chance
To turn back time
So I never would believe
~ end
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Azanna
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Re: How?
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 07:10:49 PM AEST
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non fido amore, non fido di uomini.
i do not trust love, i do not trust of men.
great piece
thanks for sharing |
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Re: How?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 09:52:28 PM AEST
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You have found yourself a new stalker.
I cannot begin to express how emotional and powerful this piece is.
I am although sad to see that it had been produced as a result of sufferings and deep pains...for that i am sorry...yet you have great talent...and I am excited to see such talent, captured within your writings.
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Re: How?
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by spazz911 on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 11:05:03 PM AEST
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| i loove how u write its very...traditional and yet is so individual, its a greaat combo |
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Re: How?
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by Spike on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 06:16:35 AM AEST
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A strong and appropriately dark poem that serves as a window to your wounded heart, and, I'm sure, to the hearts of all of us who have shared your feelings.
Still, better words on a page then a serpent coiled within the chest. We'd neither love or hate or suffer if not for the delicious pain of it all.
Spike |
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Re: How?
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:46:53 AM AEST
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Amazing. Absolutely incredible!! I can really relate, having lost someone recently like this... not in body, but in spirit. This is an awesome piece!!!
*~Erin~* |
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