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Death
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 04:09:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Pounding in my head
Screeching in my ears
as i open my eyes its gone
like a spirit hunting me
as i close my eyes its there
like a spirit stalking me
disappears and reappears
death is stalking me
i feel like theres chains around me
I dont feel free
suffacating
choking on my breath
the noise sharpens
as im going insane
from the harash noise pounding in my brain
death is stalking me
trying to sleep on my bed
knowing soon i'll be dead
sweating,choking and trying to fight my sleep
my life i want to keep
cause i wanted to die
cutting my wrists
now death is stalking me
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2005-04-09 16:09:44]
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Re: Death
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by Archie on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 04:18:08 PM AEST
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| Sounds like you are dealing with a lot of turmoil. Things will get better if you do not give up. |
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Re: Death
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 05:30:11 PM AEST
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Provacitive in it's nature strongly stated yet so
beautiful in it's honesty, excellant writting and
boldly mature . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Death
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by angel_eyes70 on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 09:01:29 PM AEST
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| that just hit me right in my heart. you must feel so much pain. anyways nice write |
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Re: Death
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by Mangakaman on
Thursday, 7th April 2011 @ 10:08:44 PM AEST
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| The struggle in your poem is excellent. You don't know what you have until you almost lose it. An appreciation for life is found and a new fear of losing it follows. Keep on writing!! |
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