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Console Me
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 01:39:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I’ve got nothing in my dreams
I’ve got nothing in my soul
I’ve got nothing in my life
To console me
To console me
To console me
Console me
Console me
I walk alone
This road
My home is never here
My feelings
Have no where to go
In cold nights
I shiver
In cold nights
I cry
My feelings
Have no where to go
I’ve got nothing in my dreams
I’ve got nothing in my soul
I’ve got nothing in my life
To console me
To console me
To console me
Console me
Console me
Torn pages
In my past
Have taught me
That happiness
Will never last
Unmistakable
In the harsh wind
I will never smile again
I’ve got nothing in my dreams
I’ve got nothing in my soul
I’ve got nothing in my life
To console me
To console me
To console me
Console me
Console me
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Re: Console Me
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 02:47:33 PM AEST
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| this write coul be very good lyrics I liked it thanks ~~Crystal~~ |
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Re: Console Me
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by jjones12 on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 03:36:56 PM AEST
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great write!!!!!
=Jen= |
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Re: Console Me
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 08:16:12 PM AEST
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Torn pages
In my past
Have taught me
That happiness
Will never last
This is true, happiness is a fleeting thing. This was a sad write. I can feel the despair and lonliness. Nice job. |
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Re: Console Me
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by freckle on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:28:24 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. Very sad but still a wonderful write. I think we all can relate to it.
Carol |
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