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Painfully Lost
Contributed by
Apolla
on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 11:37:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The time passes me endlessly,
I lose track of time,
My mind shuts out all of the world,
And I become lost within.
I wander along a path only I can see,
People begin to wonder what's become of me,
I no longer care, or want to be known,
I've tried to release this endless pain I know.
So many things run through my mind,
The fragile pieces of my mind shatter and fall apart,
Each part cutting me through and through,
Leaving scars that will never heal or go away,
But be reopened with every passing day,
Digging deeper and deeper into my flesh,
Until the day when I can say my pain is no more.
Copyright ©
Apolla
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2005-04-09 11:37:57]
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Re: Painfully Lost
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by Artemis03 on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 11:47:01 AM AEST
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| ::sarcastically:: uh-huh....i see.... okie.... uuuhh huuuhhh. GREAT ! Heart2yourz. *10* |
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Re: Painfully Lost
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by pixie on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 01:11:52 PM AEST
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deep and emotional, well written
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Re: Painfully Lost
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 04:36:46 PM AEST
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I absolutely love ur poem. Expressed with immense darkness and the verses flowed pretty well. An excellent poem written very well.
A great job
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Sue |
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